Monday, January 18, 2010

WHO AM I?








I am in pursuit of the of the identity,
that I could best identify with,
my essence is not in fidelity
with my heart,pleads who am I?

My soul is still alien to my intellect
the conflict carries with every beat
thoughts become tough to exchange and recollect
they are baffled,question who am I?

I fail to comprehend myself
I don't even know myself well
what I want,what I need
are not the only ones,who am I?

Am I right,Am I wrong
I can't answer,my heart is juvenile
people still taunt me,why am still not strong
I just reply,I dont know,who am I?

Don't know when complexities cease,
when I do stop and recognise
my inner spirit which is still under dreams,
and put an end to the question,who am I?








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7 comments:

  1. sabari .pJanuary 19, 2010 at 10:30 AM

    "who m i?"
    it's a nice one !!!!
    keep it up!!!!!!!!

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  2. UnknownJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:40 PM

    honestly,it was confusing.but words and the meaning deep inside make it so honest and beautiful.just like you

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  3. bobJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:45 PM

    good going..you make me proud!

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  4. monikaApril 5, 2010 at 2:12 PM

    u r Krithika babu..... :) !!

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  5. monikaApril 5, 2010 at 2:15 PM

    thr is 1 thing- u describe ur inner thoughts very beautifully....!!
    I am a big Fan of ur poems... :)

    This is anthr awesome poem....i lvd it !!

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  6. mummyApril 13, 2010 at 8:06 PM

    Ritu U are just awesome. I know i am ur inspiration. Keep it up my ritu baby. I am proud of u .

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  7. Sameer JainApril 19, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    Amazing work! Nice question for yourself... To find out its answer, God gifted us this "Life"... live it to the fullest to know the answer!
    keep up the good work!

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